Re: Revised letter to ERI

Dorie,

I think this looks good. I have two tweaks:

On the "Let me be clear" sentence, I'd delete the "let me be clear"
introduction. I think the last sentence speaks for itself.
In the last sentence, why not conclude by saying that if they don't pay, "we
will have no choice but to take further action on this matter" and delete the
reference to attorneys.

Let me know if you have any questions. Otherwise, it is good to go.

Good luck!

Michelle

From: Dorie Hitchcock 11/16/2000 10:05 AM

To: Michelle Cash/HOU/ECT@ECT
cc:
Subject: Revised letter to ERI

Attached is the revised ERI letter incorporating your changes from
yesterday. Please take a 'fresh' look at the letter and advise me of any
additional changes and/or comments. I am out of the office today, so please
send any changes via my interoffice email. I am hoping to get the final
letter sent to Diane Nielsen by email and courier later today.
Again, it was a pleasure meeting you yesterday and I appreciate all of your
guidance concerning this matter!