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Dave:
As I mentioned yesterday, I have made a few more revisions to the Legal & Privacy statement to respond to a couple of issues raised by Justin Boyd. The final version is attached. I was unable to run a red-line of this document, so I have summarized the revisions below: 1. Section 2, second sentence: replaced the word "derivatives" with "derivations". 2. Section 4: revised in its entirety. 3. Section 9, first sentence: added "all or" before the words "any part of the website" in the third/fourth line and replaced the word "the" with "this" before the words "Legal and Privacy statement" at the end of the sentence. 4. Section 11(a): capitlized "Information" 5. Section 13: revised the reference to "this paragraph 6" to refer to "the paragraph 13" 5. Note that I added the new Section 17 at the bottom relating to T1 access. Please let me know if you have any questions or comments. Leslie
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