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Victor:
Overall, the presentation looks fine. Just a few comments; 1. When you display images of the countries' flags, show less than 50% of the flag if possible. (Possible infringement issues if we depict the entire flag.) 2. The Front Page: Currently, if a participant can't win a prize, he can't play the game. If you and Dave change your minds and decide to let such participants play, we need to add an express disclaimer following the statement re Japanese residents to the effect: "Residents of _____________ can play the game but are ineligible to win prizes due to regulatory restrictions. 3, Registration Page: Update disclaimer regarding use of registrant information (currently in right-hand corner of page) as per my latest e-mail. 4. The last page refers to "Create your own groups". I'm under the impression that we won't have groups. If this is correct, we need to delete all references to groups. 5. How To Play: I understand that this section needs to be drafted. Please forward to Mark Taylor for his review when it is complete. Be sure to avoid use of prohibited terms such as "Olympics", "Summer Games", etc. in this section. Victor Browner 08/25/2000 01:14 PM To: craig@sportsrocket.com cc: Dave Samuels/HOU/ECT@ECT, Erica Bess/Corp/Enron@ENRON, Rahil Jafry/HOU/ECT@ECT, Leslie Hansen/HOU/ECT@ECT Subject: The EnronOnline Games Craig, per my voice message please find attached a powerpoint slide show that shows a front page that is indicative of the look we would like to have for all the pages, the old Gateway page with new text, followed by the "sorry you can not play" slide, then the registration page and finally "the how it all works" page. This is the sequence the pages should flow from the gate. Please note the comments and language that is to be added to the pages (obviously the language needs to be incorporated in a more aesthetically pleasing manner than it is presently). We are finalising the listing of countries that can play and the Official Rules. We will send these to you as soon as we have them finalised. In the mean time could you forward us a copy of the "how to play guide" that the contestants will view for legal perusal. Please call me with any questions issues feedback you may have. Also I would like to get a status report on the prizes. Cheers Victor 713 345 3425
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